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Ok, so I had/have to do a project on Corrie tenBoom.
You may not know who she is, but anyways, I have to write a essay on her and make a collage.
Here is the format I have to do-
My paper/rubric thing says
First paragraph: a summary of your book.
Second para.: a description and commentary on your fa. part
third para.: is this person a hero.
Please read my essay and tell me if it makes sence and/or what I can change to make it better!
Essay-
Corrie ten Boom was just a Dutch, Christian watchmaker. At the age of 50, what could she do? She changed the world around her saving people even if it ment going out of her comfort zone.
During the holocaust, she helped save many Jews by working with the underground resistance. She and her family added a wall in Corrie’s own bedroom so they could shelter Jews and hide them from the Nazi raids. She was caught working with the underground and sent to a concentration camp. She kept her strong faith in God through the good times and the hard trials. She was let out of the concentration camp and went to work to help people that were affected be the war.
Give thanks to God in all things. Fleas- they were swarming in the concentration camp’s bunk house. Corrie and her sister Betsie were able to share God’s word more freely using the ‘forbidden Book’ in the concentration camp. Because of the fleas, the guards would not even think about going into the room where hundreds of women prisoners slept every night. Corrie learned another lesson on how God can use the smallest and most annoying things to have His will done.
Corrie is a hero. She saved many people lives even at the cost of her own comfort. But above all things, she is a hero because she never turned her back on God. Even when things that seemed like it could be impossible to go on (such as getting lice, being placed in solitary confinement, and being in the concentration camp) she still followed and praised God. She is defiantly one of my role models because of her faith.
Also please check out my collage.
I need to know if it is enough pics or if I need to change/add something!
HERE!!!
Please and thanks in advance!!!
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You may not know who she is, but anyways, I have to write a essay on her and make a collage.
Here is the format I have to do-
My paper/rubric thing says
First paragraph: a summary of your book.
Second para.: a description and commentary on your fa. part
third para.: is this person a hero.
Please read my essay and tell me if it makes sence and/or what I can change to make it better!
Essay-
Corrie ten Boom was just a Dutch, Christian watchmaker. At the age of 50, what could she do? She changed the world around her saving people even if it ment going out of her comfort zone.
During the holocaust, she helped save many Jews by working with the underground resistance. She and her family added a wall in Corrie’s own bedroom so they could shelter Jews and hide them from the Nazi raids. She was caught working with the underground and sent to a concentration camp. She kept her strong faith in God through the good times and the hard trials. She was let out of the concentration camp and went to work to help people that were affected be the war.
Give thanks to God in all things. Fleas- they were swarming in the concentration camp’s bunk house. Corrie and her sister Betsie were able to share God’s word more freely using the ‘forbidden Book’ in the concentration camp. Because of the fleas, the guards would not even think about going into the room where hundreds of women prisoners slept every night. Corrie learned another lesson on how God can use the smallest and most annoying things to have His will done.
Corrie is a hero. She saved many people lives even at the cost of her own comfort. But above all things, she is a hero because she never turned her back on God. Even when things that seemed like it could be impossible to go on (such as getting lice, being placed in solitary confinement, and being in the concentration camp) she still followed and praised God. She is defiantly one of my role models because of her faith.
Also please check out my collage.
I need to know if it is enough pics or if I need to change/add something!
HERE!!!
Please and thanks in advance!!!
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