Me poem

[Cutiepoo2014]

your poem is awesome!!! It's better than my 27 lined poem!!!

well thnxz u !! ^_^

 

[fluffums]

Here it are***************************

EDITED VERSON:

I love you

But you dont even know

I said it to you once

but you didn't listen

when I had that wreck

you weren't there

when I was in the hospital

you didn't send me a card

when I came back to school

you didn't give me a second glance

when I talked to you

you didn't give me a time of day

I was sad for a long time

but I got over it

then finally, finally you  said

"I loved you"

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so wa u think?

I corrected your edited version for you, I put the corrections in bold. I'm not trying to offend you, I want to be a book editor when I grow up, and want all the practice I can get!

Very nice poem! I wish I could write poems well.

 

[Cutiepoo2014]

Very nice poem! I wish I could write poems well.

thnxz

bout the book editer thing,...its kk

 

[wwefan0704]

I am NOT a poetry type kinda guy

 

[Cutiepoo2014]

I am NOT a poetry type kinda guy

ooook well u dident tell me if u liked it ^_^

 

[wwefan0704]

If i liked poetry i would say it is preety good!!

 

[Cutiepoo2014]

If i liked poetry i would say it is preety good!!

well thnxz u

 

[crazyy*tama]

I think its pretty cool 10/10

 

[Cutiepoo2014]

I think its pretty cool 10/10

u mean 10000000/12? well thnxz ^_^