My new song

[mimitchigirl2000]

It's time----

I show my true colours

To you--------

I know this is sudden

But I've got to reveal

Myself--------

It's somthin'

That I don't understand----

I wish I could explain it

But it's hard----

I'm in love with you, Boy

Every day----

I look you in the eyes

but you don't seem----

To know me-------

It's somthin'

That I don't understand----

I wish I could explain it

But it's hard----

I'm in love with you, Boy----

I know it's a bit short, but post in your views like last time!

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Hello?

 

[tamaw/pants]

Hello?

please dont make multiple posts to bump your topic up.

people will answer in time.

for my opinion, sorry its not my kind of song.

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Soz. That ok, but I'd like some good comments as well, but I appreciate and respect your view.

 

[ta9394]

love it! (add some to it though... make it do a chorus...)

 

[Skippy~Tama]

I love it! You did a great job!

Yeah, it is a bit short, but it should be easy to lengthen! Like they said ^, make a chorus of it, add a couple lyrics, and all will be done! I wish I had the tune to it, though... Its a wonderful song! Such deep lyrics...

 

[Tamacool]

I like that song, its good!

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Glad you like my second song! I'll edit it!

It's time----

I show my true colours

To you--------

I know this is sudden

But I've got to reveal

Myself--------

It's somthin'

That I don't understand----

I wish I could explain it

But it's hard----

I'm in love with you, Boy----

Every day----

I look you in the eyes

but you don't seem----

To know me-------

It's somthin'

That I don't understand----

I wish I could explain it

But it's hard----

I'm in love with you, Boy----

It's hardly a secret

Lovin you is it boy

I wanna be just friends

Don't take it far------------

It's somthin'

That I don't understand----

I wish I could explain it

But it's hard----

I'm in love with you, Boy----

there, it's a bit longer

 

[tamaw/pants]

love it! (add some to it though... make it do a chorus...)

yeah, adding a chorus really helps.

when you look at songs lyrics, it usualy repeats the chorus a couple of times.

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

yeah. Have any of you seen my first song?

 

[nlopez2]

i love it! u did an awesome job!

 

[tamaw/pants]

i'm not sure if i've seen your first song or not.

do you play an instrument like guitar or piano?

 

[VioletetchiGirl101]

Not seen the first but I like the 2nd!

 

[VioletetchiGirl101]

i'm not sure if i've seen your first song or not.
do you play an instrument like guitar or piano?

I play Gutiar!So I make a song then I add a beat!And my little cousin got a Drumm set for Christmas and A Gutair for his Birthday!Which is the day after Christmas Day!

 

[VioletetchiGirl101]

Can I use some ideas from your song,to put into my song?I'm getting ready to make it!Sometimes I just sing and It makes a wonderful song!

Not to be off topic