My song!

[mimitchigirl2000]

When we met,---

It was love at first sight-------

I can't belive,

You took it away from me--------

Do you take me for a fool,--------

Did you use me so you could get----

Her?--------

Baby I know----

I've made-- mistakes-------

Can't you come back---

To me?------

Boy don't break my heart

Like I say---

I know we're meant to be--------

So don't be dragge----d

Into her little game-------

I know it's not the same--------

Baby I know----

I've made-- mistakes-------

Can't you come back---

To me?------

Boy don't break my heart

Why--------

Do you go with her?--------

Can't you see

It breaks my heart

Baby------

Baby I know----

I've made-- mistakes-------

Can't you come back---

To me?------

Boy don't break my heart----------

I did that myself! Post your reviews!

 

[*Summer*]

Wow. That's good...

I can't even write songs yet.

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Thanks. I've been thinking of words to do but I kept forgeting them. I'll try to find a way to show you the tune. *Gets out music book* No, this is my guitar book. I nedd a vocal music book. I'll have to make the music with my guitar next!

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Any more reviews?

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

Is no one going to comment on how good or bad it is? Cause it was hard to write!

 

[Rocken Sisters]

Thats very nice, But have you heard of patients? Please wait. People will take along time admireing your song! ^.-

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

sorry....... it's just that I'd like some reviews so I can take it to school if it's good.

 

[Rocken Sisters]

Yes but we have all day. Eh?

-RS

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

No! I nly got a min till I get off!

 

[kirara]

wow that wuz a pretty good song

 

[Tamagirl_Desy]

Wow! Nice song, especially for a person your age.

Here's a little tip for writing future songs: Write a couple of different lyrics. In this song, you seem to be repeating yourself alot. Thats fine, but in my own opinion I think variety is better!

*Tgd*

 

[crazyy*tama]

I love your song! You are good songwriter.

I'm 9 too!

 

[Hemna123]

I like it but whats the tune

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

I can't tell you as I can't record it: my cam's broken

 

[TwistAudio]

Pretty good! I can't write songs. If I do it's gonna be like "MY baloney has a first name!" but in a rap tune or something XD

 

[Dr@g@n]

Dx

That's a lot better than I could ever do. I stink at writing songs...

 

[mimitchigirl2000]

lol. I might post another when I've done 1

 

[VioletetchiGirl101]

LOVE IT!!!!!!! ^_^ :=):$

 

[Monchi]

nice song!I can hear the music already! Keep up the good work!