Orange Burst! Feedback

[KouhiiTenshi]

Did you like my story? If yopu guys like it, tell me. If no body comments I think nobody likes it but doesn't want to tell me, so please vote in the poll and tell me here if I should countinue it. Please and thankyou!

 

[tamaheaven2]

I loved it. Please do the next chapter!

 

[KouhiiTenshi]

Heehee, thanks!

 

[SuPeRcHriSTY10]

That was awesome! You really should keep writing it!

 

[romantictam]

I love it.

 

[CCandMadi]

Awesomness. I got a bit confused though, you didn't indecate who was speaking at some parts. But other than that, it was really good! Tubular plot line xD

 

[KouhiiTenshi]

Thanks everyone for the comments! Since everyone gave me positive comments/votes I can safely assume you all liked it. I'm working on chapter 2 now, and I'll have it up shortly!

 

[KouhiiTenshi]

Awesomness. I got a bit confused though, you didn't indecate who was speaking at some parts. But other than that, it was really good! Tubular plot line xD

Thanks! I'm sorry for your confused-ness, I'll try to fix that while I'm writing chapter 2!