Emmatutu
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Morning at Dawn
It's morning (at dawn)
and on the grass there is dew.
I spring from my bed
(I can't wait to see you)
You stand on my porch,
with that cute little smile,
I run up and hug you
(I haven't seen you in a while)
You tell me you love me,
and I repeat it back to you.
When you ask to marry me,
(I say "I do.")
We did part from each other
But I am not sad to say.
Because love has reasons
(That took him away.)
I will meet someone new
maybe it's time to move on.
Though all always remember you,
and that morning at dawn.
Comments? What do I need to work on? (I know it's kind of short)
It's morning (at dawn)
and on the grass there is dew.
I spring from my bed
(I can't wait to see you)
You stand on my porch,
with that cute little smile,
I run up and hug you
(I haven't seen you in a while)
You tell me you love me,
and I repeat it back to you.
When you ask to marry me,
(I say "I do.")
We did part from each other
But I am not sad to say.
Because love has reasons
(That took him away.)
I will meet someone new
maybe it's time to move on.
Though all always remember you,
and that morning at dawn.
Comments? What do I need to work on? (I know it's kind of short)