rate the person's poem above you XD

[Smallquailrooster]

3/10. Im not into that kinda stuff.

Guitar in the corner, your jeans and your socks in a heap

Taquilla(sp.?) and salt shaked on light, on the blankets where you sleep

I've come to escape the citylife screams

 

I'm so happy, happy here with you

Are you happy? Say you're happy too

All i need i've found in you

I'm so happy i'm here with you.

 

[DanceRemix.]

it says 'you' too much at the ends...

5/10

I don't care,

just leave me out here.

You left me in the dark before.

It doesn't make a difference anymore.

Just remember this one last time,

If you walk out that door,

I'm no longer yours.

Sorry... I made it up quickly...

 

[Smallquailrooster]

4/10 i cant really see any scene of that in my head when i read it..sorry

Here we are so whatcha gonna do?

Do i gotta spell it out for you?

I can see that you've got other plans for tonight

but i don't really care

size me up, you know i beat the best

tick tock no time to rest

they can say what they wanna say but tonight i just don't really care

C'mon baby, we aint gonna live forever

Lemme show you all the things that we could do

You know we're gonna be together

and i wanna spend the night with you

with you

come with me tonight we could make the night last forever.

OMG i totally stole this! You probably won't know where from, though!