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~ Prologue ~
Reva Dalby admired her reflection in the glass counter top. Only two weeks till Christmas, she thought, smoothing the eye shadow on her left eyelid with her little finger, then adjusting her wavy red hair.
Shoppers crowded the aisles of the brightly lit department store. The Christmas carols jangling out over the loudspeakers were nearly drowned out by the steady roar of voices, of shuffling feet, of ringing phones, crying babies, the whole electric buzz and whir of all large department stores at holiday time.
Reva leaned against the glass perfume counter, ignoring the blur of customers, her purple nails clicking against the glass, a nervous habit she rather enjoyed. She glanced up at the clock. Another hour until lunchtime, when she could escape from her narrow, noisy prison cell.
What am I doing here, anyway? Reva asked herself, tapping her nails more rapidly against the glass. Why did I ever agree to take this job.
Her cold blue eyes focused on the makeup counter across the aisle, where two salesgirls, blond model types, had scurried to wait on a dumpy woman in a stained, purple trench-coat, carrying two brown bags.
How tacky, Reva though scornfully. That woman is beyond makeup. She should go straight to plastic surgery.
And look at the bleach job on the one over there. Or is her hair naturally green?
Reva snickered. Making fun of the customers was the only thing that got her through the day. They were all so pitiful. They didn't have a clue.
She glanced up at the clock It hadn't moved. I could be out enjoying my Saturday, Reva thought. She rubbed the back of her neck, then pushed her hair into place.
Why do they have to keep it two-hundred degrees in here? She wondered shaking her head. I'm gonna have to talk to Daddy about turning down the heat, she decided.
She was started by a tap on her shoulder. She spun around to see Arlene Smith, or Ms.Smith as she liked to be called, the sales manager for the perfume department, and Reva's boss. She was a short, frail woman who though she was chic and trendy because she wore men's suits.
Yuck. Those tacky shoulder pads! Thought Reva. Is she going to try out for fullback for the Bears?
"Reva, do you have an earache?" Ms. Smith asked, her face wrinkled with concern.
Reva lowered her hands from her ears. "No, it's that song," She explained. "If you hear it once, it stays in your head all day and rots in your brain."
"Well, I really don't think-" Ms. Smith started to scold.
But Reva interrupted her. "It's the rum-tum-tums," she said.
"I mean, really how many of those can you take?"
Ms. Smith ignored the question. "Reva, I'll take the floor for awhile. The Chanel recorder just came in. I was wondering if you could stack some perfume bottles in the storage room?"
"Gee, I can't," Reva said, not sounding at all sorry.
"I just did my nails this morning."
"What?!" Ms. Smith was mad.
"You heard me."
Ms. Smith almost fainted.
"This really is enough!" She glared at Reva, and spun around on her men's wingtips, stormed down the aisle, heading toward the Main Office.
Two more customers later, Reva decided to adjust her makeup. Reva took out her lipstick from the drawer, pulled off the top, and twisted the tube. She turned toward the counter top mirror so that she could see herself better. She puckered her lips in a pout, and begin spreading the magenta lipstick on them.
It took a second for the pain to register.
The she screamed and dropped the lipstick.
Her lips throbbed with pain.
She turned toward the mirror to see blood pouring down here chin.
I'm cut.
I'm bleeding.
What has happened here?
Pressing a wad of tissues toward her mouth, she saw large drips on blood on the countertop.
She picked up the lipstick and examined it.
There was a needle. Poking out from the center of the tube.
Somebody put that needle in her lipstick.
But who? Who would do such a vicious thing to her?
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Chapter one will come soon. Give me your thoughts! :3
Reva Dalby admired her reflection in the glass counter top. Only two weeks till Christmas, she thought, smoothing the eye shadow on her left eyelid with her little finger, then adjusting her wavy red hair.
Shoppers crowded the aisles of the brightly lit department store. The Christmas carols jangling out over the loudspeakers were nearly drowned out by the steady roar of voices, of shuffling feet, of ringing phones, crying babies, the whole electric buzz and whir of all large department stores at holiday time.
Reva leaned against the glass perfume counter, ignoring the blur of customers, her purple nails clicking against the glass, a nervous habit she rather enjoyed. She glanced up at the clock. Another hour until lunchtime, when she could escape from her narrow, noisy prison cell.
What am I doing here, anyway? Reva asked herself, tapping her nails more rapidly against the glass. Why did I ever agree to take this job.
Her cold blue eyes focused on the makeup counter across the aisle, where two salesgirls, blond model types, had scurried to wait on a dumpy woman in a stained, purple trench-coat, carrying two brown bags.
How tacky, Reva though scornfully. That woman is beyond makeup. She should go straight to plastic surgery.
And look at the bleach job on the one over there. Or is her hair naturally green?
Reva snickered. Making fun of the customers was the only thing that got her through the day. They were all so pitiful. They didn't have a clue.
She glanced up at the clock It hadn't moved. I could be out enjoying my Saturday, Reva thought. She rubbed the back of her neck, then pushed her hair into place.
Why do they have to keep it two-hundred degrees in here? She wondered shaking her head. I'm gonna have to talk to Daddy about turning down the heat, she decided.
She was started by a tap on her shoulder. She spun around to see Arlene Smith, or Ms.Smith as she liked to be called, the sales manager for the perfume department, and Reva's boss. She was a short, frail woman who though she was chic and trendy because she wore men's suits.
Yuck. Those tacky shoulder pads! Thought Reva. Is she going to try out for fullback for the Bears?
"Reva, do you have an earache?" Ms. Smith asked, her face wrinkled with concern.
Reva lowered her hands from her ears. "No, it's that song," She explained. "If you hear it once, it stays in your head all day and rots in your brain."
"Well, I really don't think-" Ms. Smith started to scold.
But Reva interrupted her. "It's the rum-tum-tums," she said.
"I mean, really how many of those can you take?"
Ms. Smith ignored the question. "Reva, I'll take the floor for awhile. The Chanel recorder just came in. I was wondering if you could stack some perfume bottles in the storage room?"
"Gee, I can't," Reva said, not sounding at all sorry.
"I just did my nails this morning."
"What?!" Ms. Smith was mad.
"You heard me."
Ms. Smith almost fainted.
"This really is enough!" She glared at Reva, and spun around on her men's wingtips, stormed down the aisle, heading toward the Main Office.
Two more customers later, Reva decided to adjust her makeup. Reva took out her lipstick from the drawer, pulled off the top, and twisted the tube. She turned toward the counter top mirror so that she could see herself better. She puckered her lips in a pout, and begin spreading the magenta lipstick on them.
It took a second for the pain to register.
The she screamed and dropped the lipstick.
Her lips throbbed with pain.
She turned toward the mirror to see blood pouring down here chin.
I'm cut.
I'm bleeding.
What has happened here?
Pressing a wad of tissues toward her mouth, she saw large drips on blood on the countertop.
She picked up the lipstick and examined it.
There was a needle. Poking out from the center of the tube.
Somebody put that needle in her lipstick.
But who? Who would do such a vicious thing to her?
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Chapter one will come soon. Give me your thoughts! :3
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