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Since The Tamagotchi Guardian hasn't made a comment page for his story Tamagotchi Blood, I thought I would.

I have to say, I think that it is absolutely outstanding. I find it entertaining and I'm constantly on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next.

What does everyone else think?

 
NewtEye10 said:
Not really, I think it's great! Maybe you could add a little more description.

When will Part 3 / 4 be out?
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I agree. And yes, when will Part 3 and 4 be out? I mean, it can't take more than a couple of hours to write each part can it?

 
Martello737 said:
I agree. And yes, when will Part 3 and 4 be out? I mean, it can't take more than a couple of hours to write each part can it?
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It varies depending on the part. And I can't write if I'm not in the mood. So if I feel like it, I could write one part in between 1 and 4 hours.

But that's only when I feel like it.

I think that Part 3 will be out on Friday, or possibly before but don't count on it.

Part 4 might be out Sunday.

I can't guarantee anything though.

 
The Tamagotchi Guardian said:
It varies depending on the part. And I can't write if I'm not in the mood. So if I feel like it, I could write one part in between 1 and 4 hours.

But that's only when I feel like it.

I think that Part 3 will be out on Friday, or possibly before but don't count on it.

Part 4 might be out Sunday.

I can't guarantee anything though.
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I know what you mean.

Are we going to have any 2 part specials coming up? And how far are you on Part 3 now?

 
@Martello737 - Part 3 is a bit like a 2 part special because it contains two parts (Part 3-1 and Part 3-2). But don't worry, they'll both be released together

@NewtEye10 - I'm about half way through writing Part 3 at the moment because I've just finished Part 3-1. Well actually I think I might be a bit less than half way through because Part 3-2 is quite long.

 
I don't understand. If you're about half way through Part 3, how can it take another 2 days to get it finished?

 
@NewtEye 10 - Because you never know how long it will take. It doesn't just consist of writing either. I need to write it, then proof read it, then plan later parts and then edit it so that it will flow better with the later parts. And anyway, I do have other things I want to do other than write Tamagotchi Blood

@Martello737 - I don't want to give too much away but I'll tell you this. Laura can't stop bleeding after withdrawing her blood so she goes into town to get a plaster (she can't go home because she's supposed to be at school). She meets someone there who sees the blood and recognises it as platinum blood. Now, I don't want to say what happens to her but let's say, they aren't very friendly.

 
Have you got any other stories that you're working on and might publish soon?

 
NewtEye10 said:
Have you got any other stories that you're working on and might publish soon?
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I'm currently doing a detective series. I only started it a couple of days ago so I'm still on the first story, but you can expect to see it on TamaTalk by mid-September (or maybe before, depending on how Tamagotchi Blood goes).

 
THe only thing I would suggest is writing in paragraph form more so then you are now. Now its kind of every diffrent idea gets its own line.

 
nickkannel said:
THe only thing I would suggest is writing in paragraph form more so then you are now. Now its kind of every diffrent idea gets its own line.
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Ok. I'll bear that in mind. I mean, I know you're supposed to start a new line for speech and everything, but yeah thanks for the advice.

 
I really like your story. ^_^

I personally think the concept of blood being sold because of its type is interesting. Its execution is so far done well.

What I really hope is that we continue on with seeing a glimpse of this society and the burdens of the poor (like wood and metal) and excellent (like gold and platinum) blood types as I believe that it will strengthen the story

Overall, this is definitely going to be something i'll continue reading right through to the end!

~LadyPlague.

 
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LadyPlague said:
I really like your story. ^_^

I personally think the concept of blood being sold because of its type is interesting. Its execution is so far done well.

What I really hope is that we continue on with seeing a glimpse of this society and the burdens of the poor (like wood and metal) and excellent (like gold and platinum) blood types as I believe that it will strengthen the story

Overall, this is definitely going to be something i'll continue reading right through to the end!

~LadyPlague.
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Thanks for that. In Part 5 (or maybe 6) we go to Laura's school, where there's a lot of cultural diversity and people of all bloods. I don't want to give too much away now, but I think that's what you're talking about.

 
I'm sorry about the delay in releasing the next part guys - but I've got writers' block, and on top of that my computer is really slow. I hope to have it out on Monday. Sorry again

 
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