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[SIZE=8pt]Chapter.1[/SIZE]
I closed my eyes as a shrill scream escaped my throat.
Bouncing hard, I opened them just in time to see the trees fly by in a jarring blur. "Whoa!" I was tossed forward as I roared straight down into darkness.
A sudden spin made me cry out again. My car tilted hard to the left and I bumped into my sister, Rosie. She was screaming as well. Her bright red hair flew out wildly behind her head.
We swooped down once more, a steep dip. I yelped in surpise as I felt myself almost fly up from the seat. The trees whirred by, shadowy in the dark moonlight. The car clattered noisly as it began to climb up again.
"This is great!" I screamed to Rosie.
Her face was bright red. Her blue eyes were wide, staring up to the top of the track. She grinned at me and started to reply, but we swooped down again. When the ride stopped and we were back to the little station-
"You were right, Jake!" she exclaimed.
"The Scorpion is awesome!."
We staggered off the platform and headed for the exit path. I turned back to stare at the enormous roller coaster, the wooden tracks rising up even darker than the right sky.
My heart was still racing. As Rosie and I walked, we were surrounded by laughter, shouting voices." I-I thought the ride was over,"Rosie said smoothing out her hair.
"But then we went up again!"
"That has to be the longest roller coster ride anywhere!" I exclaimed. "Other roller coaster rides only last a minute or 2. But this was like over 4 minutes!"
I'm kinda an expert on roller coasters. I ride them whenever I get a chance. And i never ride 'em just once. This was Rosie's first time riding the Scorpion, i'd ridden it about half a dozen times.
She 13 and I'm 13, but I think I look older. She about 5 inches shorter than me, even with all that wild red hair. I guess she's kinda pretty. She has nice green eyes, and a great smile.
People always tell me I don't smile much, I've got dark brown hair, and dak brown eyes. I'm just serious, thats all.
We stopped at a food stand to buy Icees. All that screaming can make you thirsty. After having gulped down all of her soda, Rosie glanced up at the dark sky. A pale half-moon had risen above the trees. "It's getting pretty late." she said. 'Past your bedtime, Jake." She joked.
Ha-ha." I replied rolling my eyes.
Rosie and I threw are cups away.
"What do you wanna do now?" I asked. We had been at the park since early that morning. We had already been on most of the other roller coasters.
"Let's ride the Scorpion again!" Rosie cried.
Her eyes lit up as an excited grin crossed her face. "Come on!"
"The line is pretty long." I said. Glancing at my watch.
"Come on!" she said, ignoring me. She ran off toward it.
"Okay." I sighed.
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That was when all the trouble began...
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Please comment and tell meh what you think. I spent like 3 days just writing this! xD
I closed my eyes as a shrill scream escaped my throat.
Bouncing hard, I opened them just in time to see the trees fly by in a jarring blur. "Whoa!" I was tossed forward as I roared straight down into darkness.
A sudden spin made me cry out again. My car tilted hard to the left and I bumped into my sister, Rosie. She was screaming as well. Her bright red hair flew out wildly behind her head.
We swooped down once more, a steep dip. I yelped in surpise as I felt myself almost fly up from the seat. The trees whirred by, shadowy in the dark moonlight. The car clattered noisly as it began to climb up again.
"This is great!" I screamed to Rosie.
Her face was bright red. Her blue eyes were wide, staring up to the top of the track. She grinned at me and started to reply, but we swooped down again. When the ride stopped and we were back to the little station-
"You were right, Jake!" she exclaimed.
"The Scorpion is awesome!."
We staggered off the platform and headed for the exit path. I turned back to stare at the enormous roller coaster, the wooden tracks rising up even darker than the right sky.
My heart was still racing. As Rosie and I walked, we were surrounded by laughter, shouting voices." I-I thought the ride was over,"Rosie said smoothing out her hair.
"But then we went up again!"
"That has to be the longest roller coster ride anywhere!" I exclaimed. "Other roller coaster rides only last a minute or 2. But this was like over 4 minutes!"
I'm kinda an expert on roller coasters. I ride them whenever I get a chance. And i never ride 'em just once. This was Rosie's first time riding the Scorpion, i'd ridden it about half a dozen times.
She 13 and I'm 13, but I think I look older. She about 5 inches shorter than me, even with all that wild red hair. I guess she's kinda pretty. She has nice green eyes, and a great smile.
People always tell me I don't smile much, I've got dark brown hair, and dak brown eyes. I'm just serious, thats all.
We stopped at a food stand to buy Icees. All that screaming can make you thirsty. After having gulped down all of her soda, Rosie glanced up at the dark sky. A pale half-moon had risen above the trees. "It's getting pretty late." she said. 'Past your bedtime, Jake." She joked.
Ha-ha." I replied rolling my eyes.
Rosie and I threw are cups away.
"What do you wanna do now?" I asked. We had been at the park since early that morning. We had already been on most of the other roller coasters.
"Let's ride the Scorpion again!" Rosie cried.
Her eyes lit up as an excited grin crossed her face. "Come on!"
"The line is pretty long." I said. Glancing at my watch.
"Come on!" she said, ignoring me. She ran off toward it.
"Okay." I sighed.
..
That was when all the trouble began...
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Please comment and tell meh what you think. I spent like 3 days just writing this! xD
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