Doodle_Bear
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I loved writting and I came up with my story called The Journal of Lila.
Journal,
Well mom left of on her buiness trip this morning.She will have the miss my Ballet.Dads In jail.So im staying with Aunt Rose.The mean old witch.Its almost dinner time.Roast beef.My little sister,Meghan,Is one the other side of the room drawing.We get along well for sisters.Aunt Rose treats Meg worse than me.My older brother Sam is here too.But hes in anther room.Doing whatever boys do.Well,I have to go,Aunt Rose is calling us down for dinnner.
This is just a small part.I want people to comment on it though.Please comment!
Journal,
Well mom left of on her buiness trip this morning.She will have the miss my Ballet.Dads In jail.So im staying with Aunt Rose.The mean old witch.Its almost dinner time.Roast beef.My little sister,Meghan,Is one the other side of the room drawing.We get along well for sisters.Aunt Rose treats Meg worse than me.My older brother Sam is here too.But hes in anther room.Doing whatever boys do.Well,I have to go,Aunt Rose is calling us down for dinnner.
This is just a small part.I want people to comment on it though.Please comment!
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