The TamaHigh school

[sprogs]

Does anyone like my story so far?No-one likes my storys ive written before.I wrote 2 storys about My tama Miri and no-one seemed 2 like them.So post & tell me what u think.

 

[cutie_pop]

I think you started the story very good! i cant wait to see watll happen next!

 

[sprogs]

Yay someone likes my story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you! im jotting ideas now..........

 

[NeWyOrKsBiGpUn]

I think your story is nice.

 

[chlo56789]

I think your ideas are awsome! h34r: But I think if you write it in paragraph form, more people would like it. h34r:

chlo56789 <_<

 

[sprogs]

THanks 4 the tip.Im not very good at paragraphs, but Ill try!