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[SIZE=11pt] this poem was posted as a bulletin on myspace and i thought i'd share it with all of you because it's just soo sad... i didn't write it btw[/SIZE]

 

Her hair was up in a pony tail,

 

her favorite dress tied with a bow.

 

 

Today was Daddy's Day at school,

 

and she couldn't wait to go.

 

 

But her mommy tried to tell her,

 

that she probably should stay home.

 

 

Why the kids might not understand,

 

if she went to school alone.

 

 

But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.

 

 

What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today.

 

 

But still her mother worried,

 

for her to face this day alone.

 

 

And that was why once again,

 

she tried to keep her daughter home.

 

 

But the little girl went to school

 

eager to tell them all.

 

 

About a dad she never sees;

 

a dad who never calls.

 

 

There were daddies along the wall in back,

 

for everyone to meet.

 

 

Children squirming impatiently,

 

anxious in their seats

 

One by one the teacher called a student from the class.

 

 

To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed.

 

 

At last the teacher called her name,

 

every child turned to stare.

 

 

Each of them was searching,

 

for a man who wasn't there.

 

 

"Where's her daddy at?"

 

she heard a boy call out.

 

 

 

"She probably doesn't have one,"

 

another student dared to shout.

 

 

 

And from somewhere near the back,

 

she heard a daddy say,

 

"Looks like another deadbeat dad,

 

too busy to waste his day."

 

 

 

The words did not offend her,

 

as she smiled up at her Mom.

 

 

And looked back at her teacher,

 

who told her to go on.

 

 

And with hands behind her back,

 

slowly she began to speak.

 

 

And out from the mouth of a child,

 

came words incredibly unique.

 

 

 

"My Daddy couldn't be here,

 

because he lives so far away.

 

 

 

But I know he wishes he could be,

 

since this is such a special day.

 

 

And though you cannot meet him,

 

I wanted you to know.

 

 

All about my daddy,

 

and how much he loves me so.

 

 

He loved to tell me stories

 

he taught me to ride my bike.

 

 

 

He surprised me with pink roses,

 

and taught me to fly a kite.

 

 

We used to share fudge sundaes,

 

and ice cream in a cone.

 

 

And though you cannot see him.

 

I'm not standing here alone.

 

 

"Cause my daddy's always with me,

 

even though we are apart

 

I know because he told me,

 

he'll forever be in my heart"

 

With that, her little hand reached up,

 

and lay across her chest.

 

 

Feeling her own heartbeat,

 

beneath her favorite dress.

 

 

And from somewhere here in the crowd of dads,

 

her mother stood in tears.

 

 

Proudly watching her daughter,

 

who was wise beyond her years.

 

 

 

For she stood up for the love

 

of a man not in her life.

 

 

Doing what was best for her,

 

doing what was right.

 

 

And when she dropped her hand back down,

 

staring straight into the crowd.

 

 

 

She finished with a voice so soft,

 

but its message clear and loud.

 

 

"I love my daddy very much,

 

he's my shining star.

 

And if he could, he'd be here,

 

but heaven's just too far

 

You see he was a firefighter

 

and died just this past year

 

When airplanes hit the towers

 

and taught Americans to fear.

 

 

 

But sometimes when I close my eyes,

 

it's like he never went away."

 

And then she closed her eyes,

 

and she saw him there that day.

 

 

And to her mothers amazement,

 

she witnessed with surprise

 

A room full of daddies and children,

 

all starting to close their eyes.

 

 

Who knows what they saw before them,

 

who knows what they felt inside.

 

 

Perhaps for merely a second,

 

they saw him at her side.

 

 

 

"I know you're with me Daddy,"

 

to the silence she called out.

 

 

And what happened next made believers,

 

of those once filled with doubt.

 

 

Not one in that room could explain it,

 

for each of their eyes had been closed.

 

 

 

But there on the desk beside her,

 

was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.

 

 

 

And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,

 

by the love of her shining star.

 

And given the gift of believing,

 

that heaven is never too far.

 

 

 

 

 

They say it takes a minute to find a special

 

person, an hour to appreciate them,

 

a day to love them, but then an entire

 

life to forget them.

 

 

Edit: TamaMum

Paragraph spacing and Font size changed to make the whole post more legible and less wasteful of space :mellow:

 
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that is so touching!OMG i don't even care if that girl in the poem is a real girl somewhere or just made up but...That just brought tears to my eyes!what a brave little girl "But there on the desk beside her,

was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose." omg that was my favorite part *sniff* that poem is from the heart and that poem is buetiful (sp?)

thank You for sharing that poem

 
How depressing. It's ironic how those types of stories are supposed to make you happy and enlighten you or whatever, but instead they make you cry.

 
I have seen that story so many times. It has been around since I was a kid. Its a good story, yeah, it is not true, but it relays a message to those of us who were not affected by the twin tower crashes that all those people who died had families, some were great grandparents, some were brand new moms and dads, either way they were people. Its another reality check story, gives you something to think about.

Font is too small though, I didnt read it since I saw the first few lines and knew what it was lol (I get this email at least 3 times a year) didnt wanna strain my eyes to read it again XD

 
Stories about 911 are always sad.

But yeah, the font was too small, it was hard for me to see.

There's this really sad video called, "I Miss You Daddy." I cried during that. It's about her dad that died in 9/11 as well.

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I don't care what the rest of you guys said, I loved it. It made me cry. I sent it to my friend and she's crying too. It was awesome. <3

 
The poem itself is meaningful..

The font size is beside the point. It's default, anyway, so I think it's actually the color that affected me more.

But yes, it's sad. I didn't have any loved ones die in the 9/11 attacks, but it was tragic all the same..

 
[SIZE=14pt]Aw... Its sad, but I didn't cry (Everybody:Yeah right RT... >_>) [/SIZE]

Lovely poem, If I had to write something so extraordinary, I couldn't.

But I believe its a chain....But its still beautiful...

 
OMG.

I'm crying now.

And I never cry while reading.

So sad.

I don't have any relatives who died in the 9/11.

But:

=♥= RIP anyone who died in the 9/11. May your spirit always be remembered. =♥=

 
[SIZE=8pt]i changed the font size so all can read it, and as i said before, i did not write it, i got it through myspace =)[/SIZE]

i posted it cuz it reminds me of my dad's coworker and friend who died in that tragedy

 
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