Urmm it kinda sucks

[~TearsxarexlikexStorms~]

And you wish you had one more chance

A chance to never change this one night, one sight.

Lying in the field looking at the stars

Whispering together arm in arm

Loving her is all you want and stopping, you can not.

Even though you have to go, you say no, you say no.

The free feeling, that’s the key.

Running around with a heart of glee.

Catching the stars in your hand

You give it to her and ask her to dance

And as you sway and sway

You hear her mumble “Will this ever go away?”

And you chuckle to her,

Her eyes gleaming in the moonlight

And say not now, not ever.

Not even after goodnight.

<3

You like? Criticism appreciated.

 

[Plazmical Ecstasy]

<333~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[samizer0313]

not as bad as you think

 

[Pikachu_Hat]

Its Good, Better than what I write~

Im Gonna Go Post Some of My work~<3

 

[x.Rachel]

Hah.

Deffinately <3.

 

[x.MusicalClouds]

It's lovely. <33

I like how it's not too cheesy. :33 You often see that in love poems.

 

[The Invisible Ice Climbers]

Awesome!