Who likes my story Camp Watershed

[PipSqueak101]

Someone please tell me if my story is good.

 

[mametchilove]

You went belistic and ill never read it again!!!

 

[PipSqueak101]

Nice. Real nice.

Like your signature too. Real nice.

[sarcasm is hard to read, better to hear]

 

[Dr.Tama]

I think your story was pretty darn good! But a few more charecters and a bit more of the action happening in the story couldn't hurt.