Tamakiddy!!
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Hey, Im thinking of a story, about my Character Yazi.
How do you think the story will go like?
Here's a bit of...I guess a chapter bit:
She collapesed to her knees, looking at the photo. Yazi began to tremble, and then started crying. Not just the teary cry, but a plea. A Plea for help. The Home she had now had no one around to help her, Exept her one friend, Sen. Yazi cried over the photo of her mom, Her livid red hair flowing, and her smile welcoming her, as if she was letting her come into a special room. Yazi looked up at the moon, her fallen tears glistened on the hard ground. She stood up, and found it very difficult. She leaned on the closest thing she could grab. She felt a large gust of wind, and her legs gave away. She fell backwards, onto he bed, her arms spread out. She could hear footsteps down the hall, but it was drowned out with the loud, shreiking scream in her head. Then she blacked out.
How is it? its just a little bit of it.
How do you think the story will go like?
Here's a bit of...I guess a chapter bit:
She collapesed to her knees, looking at the photo. Yazi began to tremble, and then started crying. Not just the teary cry, but a plea. A Plea for help. The Home she had now had no one around to help her, Exept her one friend, Sen. Yazi cried over the photo of her mom, Her livid red hair flowing, and her smile welcoming her, as if she was letting her come into a special room. Yazi looked up at the moon, her fallen tears glistened on the hard ground. She stood up, and found it very difficult. She leaned on the closest thing she could grab. She felt a large gust of wind, and her legs gave away. She fell backwards, onto he bed, her arms spread out. She could hear footsteps down the hall, but it was drowned out with the loud, shreiking scream in her head. Then she blacked out.
How is it? its just a little bit of it.
