A poem that I wrote...
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LEAVE ME;
You can leave me here,
here to cry.
Leave me here,
in this greyish sky.
I'll waste away,
so leave me here to die.
I'll waste away,
and hten you'll sigh.
You can leave me here,
to waste away,
waste away under this greyish sky,
where I'll be scared,
where I'll want to leave.
If you leave me here,
I'll start to cry.
But, why would you,
leave me here? Why.
You can leave me here,
here to cry.
Leave me here,
under this bluish sky?
It's getting brighter,
now red,
now yellow...
Now black.
You're gone now?
Are you leaving me,
here to die?
To die under this now black sky.
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I wrote this peom and it only took me 15 minutes, during LA class because I was bored.
My teacher thinks poetry comes too easily to me and marks me harder.
But the truth is,
when I have strong feelings towards someone or something (in this case the guy I love) poetry comes very easily to me...^ _ ^
Hope you liked my poem.
Please posst your comments what you liked and dissliked.
I would like to know what you liked so I know what I did good on.
And know what you dissliked to know how I can improve.
Thanks...
//mimichi7
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LEAVE ME;
You can leave me here,
here to cry.
Leave me here,
in this greyish sky.
I'll waste away,
so leave me here to die.
I'll waste away,
and hten you'll sigh.
You can leave me here,
to waste away,
waste away under this greyish sky,
where I'll be scared,
where I'll want to leave.
If you leave me here,
I'll start to cry.
But, why would you,
leave me here? Why.
You can leave me here,
here to cry.
Leave me here,
under this bluish sky?
It's getting brighter,
now red,
now yellow...
Now black.
You're gone now?
Are you leaving me,
here to die?
To die under this now black sky.
-------------------------
I wrote this peom and it only took me 15 minutes, during LA class because I was bored.
My teacher thinks poetry comes too easily to me and marks me harder.
But the truth is,
when I have strong feelings towards someone or something (in this case the guy I love) poetry comes very easily to me...^ _ ^
Hope you liked my poem.
Please posst your comments what you liked and dissliked.
I would like to know what you liked so I know what I did good on.
And know what you dissliked to know how I can improve.
Thanks...
//mimichi7
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