GotchiGirl96
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To love is to hate
To succeed is to fail
Although going through everything
Has ceased to prevail
She strives for perfection
Yearns for contentment
Does all in her power
To be able to present it
That moment of pride
That second of glory
She wishes upon a star
To come true, her fairytale story
Doesn't that sound so... off? Yuck, it's horrible. Do something about this. Give me crit. Be really harsh. I need it. I haven't written a good poem since 3rd grade. D:
To succeed is to fail
Although going through everything
Has ceased to prevail
She strives for perfection
Yearns for contentment
Does all in her power
To be able to present it
That moment of pride
That second of glory
She wishes upon a star
To come true, her fairytale story
Doesn't that sound so... off? Yuck, it's horrible. Do something about this. Give me crit. Be really harsh. I need it. I haven't written a good poem since 3rd grade. D: