cluck_cluck_chicken
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Ok. I'm writing a shortish story. Its called 'Killed by a what?'
Its about a girl, and her loyal pet. I shall tell no more or it'll give away the end.
This is a bit you won't understand but I think would make me want to hear the rest.
Alphi swooped & knocked her out cold. Tragically trampled by the Patch Heard soon after & then lying in a pool of blood, her eyes were blank & I was certain she was now dead. Forever she'll be known as 'The Girl Killed By A What?'
BTW. Alphi isn't your usual flying animal.
Comments?
Its about a girl, and her loyal pet. I shall tell no more or it'll give away the end.
This is a bit you won't understand but I think would make me want to hear the rest.
Alphi swooped & knocked her out cold. Tragically trampled by the Patch Heard soon after & then lying in a pool of blood, her eyes were blank & I was certain she was now dead. Forever she'll be known as 'The Girl Killed By A What?'
BTW. Alphi isn't your usual flying animal.
Comments?
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