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This is a short story extract I had to write for my English class, criticism? Please say so I know where to change it. It was written in about 20 minutes so don't be harsh. GCSE English Language – Original Writing “The other side of the track” “It’s time...”...Those were the last words that...

Very easily actually, considering the fact some people in 3rd world countries have not even heard of a toilet? You take for granted what you have. I have a cell phone, but I don't live and die on it. I use it for what it's needed for.

Here is my best piece.. ---

I honestly thought you was better than that Laura. Stereotypical "Emo" - A term used to describe a cult like label of kids in todays modern society. It is mainly given to people who listen to "heavy" music such as rock, metal, etc. It is also a label given to people who chose to wear "darker...

This is THE MOST ignorant comment I have ever heard. Are you actually trying to say just because a male is attracted to someone of the same sex, this means they should be considered animals?? You fail to amaze me. No, they should not be considered animals, that is a form of discrimination...

Okay! Now it's been pushed over the top! God made two genders for a reason? GOD DOESN'T EVEN EXIST. And yes, I have 2 hours of evidence to back this up. Zeitgeist Prove to me how the above is not true? Can you break it down and prove it wrong? I believe not, therefore. Conclusion God and...

I also find this very stereotypical and inappropriate (:

Haha that sounds funny :) Skating O: 12 set + Kickflip = Bad Idea O.O

I myself never knew who you was, but you seem to be a very lively and bright girl that's looking to have fun -_- Although, was the language necessary? ;) On the good side, welcome back to TamaTalk :D

Thirteen.

I'm very in love with someone XD

Bebo (Lol) Facebook (Meh) Myspace :blink: (<3 Myspace Whore!)

Msn man >D nonTT iTunes!

Jordan O: Descendant (As in descending, flowing down the river) :huh: Or a descendant of something/someone "holy". XD PSH

Um...happy?

Don't you think it would be much easier just to edit your previous post of what you was doing? *rolls eyes*

59.371 >,< Damnit almost made a minute D: It's a very fun game once you get into the swing of it!

I am listening to Blink-182 on iTunes, while playing along to their music on guitar. Learning songs for my second band! I see no advertisement O.o Especially to what is my first band O: Here O:

I did, quite a lot compared to how I am now.

Yes, from a very immature me :P And fair enough, I remember you as well.