Well, I am just making this up now, so here it goes.
She sighed, her golden fur blowing in the breeze. She turned around, and her blue eyes gazed upon the forest she had lived in since she was a pup. A blue and white wolf walked up to her. "Crystal, we need to hurry." But then he paused, looking into her eyes. "Your going to miss it...aren't you?" he said with a sigh. Crystal nodded slowly. "You will too, right Bone?" she said, as she looked at her home one last time. He nodded, then faked a smile as there mother, Stream, walked up. Her black and blue fur stood out among them. "You ready?" she said, obviusly not happy about the journey herself. Crystal sighed, not showing any effort to look happy. "I guess.." she whispered, and they started on there way. She looked at her brother, Bone, and sighed. The sun slowly set, and was replaced with a shimmering, full moon.
OK.
This is only the begining of chapter one, but what do you think?
She sighed, her golden fur blowing in the breeze. She turned around, and her blue eyes gazed upon the forest she had lived in since she was a pup. A blue and white wolf walked up to her. "Crystal, we need to hurry." But then he paused, looking into her eyes. "Your going to miss it...aren't you?" he said with a sigh. Crystal nodded slowly. "You will too, right Bone?" she said, as she looked at her home one last time. He nodded, then faked a smile as there mother, Stream, walked up. Her black and blue fur stood out among them. "You ready?" she said, obviusly not happy about the journey herself. Crystal sighed, not showing any effort to look happy. "I guess.." she whispered, and they started on there way. She looked at her brother, Bone, and sighed. The sun slowly set, and was replaced with a shimmering, full moon.
OK.
This is only the begining of chapter one, but what do you think?
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