CrowFrost~
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Advice/ideas are needed, I have a good plot line, but some ideas to weave in here and there would be nice. ^^ Here are the first to paragraphs. Teh intoduction. I can't show you more until Ch1. is done... I started this a few hours ago.
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Hah. They think it’s funny!! They think that because my name is Fern, it’s funny! That’s what everyone else thought. Whenever I was on a trip and someone asked where I lived, “Normal, Illinois.” I would say, as if it were the center of the world. Hah. Most would just look at me and crack up. You would to if you met a girl named Fern who had purple hair, bleached on the bottom, down to her knees. Black almond shaped eyes and ghost white skin. If you were her you would… well, you wouldn’t be her. I’m her. Yea, laugh if you want, but it’s true! I am a girl named Fern, (Some idiot thought it would be cute to call her daughter Fern, outta what? A book? Whoever it was is loonnnggg gone now.) I bet you’re thinking in your little pea mind ‘how the hell does she keep up with that HAIR?!?!?!’ yes…? Well, it’s simple, really, don’t brush it (Haven’t in heaven knows…) and put it in a bun, yes, a purple and bleach blond bun.
Now, then, if you want to know the story of my life, think again. I’ll tell you what I want, and if it’s my life… well, good for you. Maybe it is, maybe not. But I can tell you one thing right now, the second I turn 18 I am changing my name to something Normal… Something that isn’t my life.
Soooooo? What do you think? ^^ Please do Post! Tell me if you want me to write more, ^^
Hope you Like!
Hah. They think it’s funny!! They think that because my name is Fern, it’s funny! That’s what everyone else thought. Whenever I was on a trip and someone asked where I lived, “Normal, Illinois.” I would say, as if it were the center of the world. Hah. Most would just look at me and crack up. You would to if you met a girl named Fern who had purple hair, bleached on the bottom, down to her knees. Black almond shaped eyes and ghost white skin. If you were her you would… well, you wouldn’t be her. I’m her. Yea, laugh if you want, but it’s true! I am a girl named Fern, (Some idiot thought it would be cute to call her daughter Fern, outta what? A book? Whoever it was is loonnnggg gone now.) I bet you’re thinking in your little pea mind ‘how the hell does she keep up with that HAIR?!?!?!’ yes…? Well, it’s simple, really, don’t brush it (Haven’t in heaven knows…) and put it in a bun, yes, a purple and bleach blond bun.
Now, then, if you want to know the story of my life, think again. I’ll tell you what I want, and if it’s my life… well, good for you. Maybe it is, maybe not. But I can tell you one thing right now, the second I turn 18 I am changing my name to something Normal… Something that isn’t my life.
Soooooo? What do you think? ^^ Please do Post! Tell me if you want me to write more, ^^