Recent content by cutie_pop

Sorry, I know it's a lot of writing but are there any comments, criticism or tips?

It was a completely normal day. The weather was beautiful with not a cloud in sight. Just a glorious blue stretched out across the canvas-like sky. I remember whispering about an old rerun of Friends in the corner of our english room taking care not to get caught by our teacher, Miss Salevak. We...

My mum and I were more like best friends and didn’t have a normal mother-daughter type relationship. The fact that my dad had left us when I was two was probably why we were closer than most mothers and daughters. We did everything together, my mum and I. From window shopping to squealing when...

Hi, I based this story on one that I began writing in the Library section on tamatalk a few years ago and it isn't the fully polished version but I'd like some criticism and tips on how I can improve my writing. It isn't a finished story and I'm not planning to post the whole story as I don't...

Wow. The ending really shocked me. The murder was so sudden, I didn't see it coming! Great job! What did the teacher say after she read it? Did she leave a comment or anything like that?

Haha LOL

My friend suggested that I could get a friend to add me into a conversation in a chat room with him. That could word! ^^

A few days ago, I tried talking to him but he completely ignored me and kept walking. =[ My friend said I shouldn't talk to him this week but maybe start again next week. I wonder what I did wrong? Maybe it was the "____, you b*****d!" thing? I doubt it though because that was about a month ago. =/

Yeah, it is. Actually, that's kind of what I'm planning to do and I ALWAYS have a friend with me when I talk to him because I don't have the nerve to go by myself. I'd probably have a heart attack if I went and talked to him all by myself. >.<;

Haha, I hope so! >.<;

I DID say hi today but yeah...no conversation this week. Maybe next week?

Haha. Yeah...I have a few guy friends too...but..yeah. XD

Got to say hi during the fire drill because his class was right next to mine. He also walked my way after school though I didn't say hi. >.<;

With the help of my friends, I said hi to him twice yesterday! ^^ The first time, I called his name quite a few times but he didn't hear me so my friend called out "(His name), you b****rd!" He turned around straight away but he looked angry. I was cracking up laughing with my friend but I...

No not at all! I understand you completely. ^^ But isn't that like playing hard to get? Apparently guys don't like it when you do that. =.= The "How was your weekend?" thing seems like a good idea though. I'm friends with one of his friends and we have this thing where we do this "Hey, how was...