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Sorry, I know it's a lot of writing but are there any comments, criticism or tips?

It was a completely normal day. The weather was beautiful with not a cloud in sight. Just a glorious blue stretched out across the canvas-like sky. I remember whispering about an old rerun of Friends in the corner of our english room taking care not to get caught by our teacher, Miss Salevak. We...

My mum and I were more like best friends and didn’t have a normal mother-daughter type relationship. The fact that my dad had left us when I was two was probably why we were closer than most mothers and daughters. We did everything together, my mum and I. From window shopping to squealing when...

Hi, I based this story on one that I began writing in the Library section on tamatalk a few years ago and it isn't the fully polished version but I'd like some criticism and tips on how I can improve my writing. It isn't a finished story and I'm not planning to post the whole story as I don't...

Wow. The ending really shocked me. The murder was so sudden, I didn't see it coming! Great job! What did the teacher say after she read it? Did she leave a comment or anything like that?

Haha LOL

My friend suggested that I could get a friend to add me into a conversation in a chat room with him. That could word! ^^

A few days ago, I tried talking to him but he completely ignored me and kept walking. =[ My friend said I shouldn't talk to him this week but maybe start again next week. I wonder what I did wrong? Maybe it was the "____, you b*****d!" thing? I doubt it though because that was about a month ago. =/

Yeah, it is. Actually, that's kind of what I'm planning to do and I ALWAYS have a friend with me when I talk to him because I don't have the nerve to go by myself. I'd probably have a heart attack if I went and talked to him all by myself. >.<;

Haha, I hope so! >.<;

I DID say hi today but yeah...no conversation this week. Maybe next week?

Haha. Yeah...I have a few guy friends too...but..yeah. XD

Got to say hi during the fire drill because his class was right next to mine. He also walked my way after school though I didn't say hi. >.<;

With the help of my friends, I said hi to him twice yesterday! ^^ The first time, I called his name quite a few times but he didn't hear me so my friend called out "(His name), you b****rd!" He turned around straight away but he looked angry. I was cracking up laughing with my friend but I...

No not at all! I understand you completely. ^^ But isn't that like playing hard to get? Apparently guys don't like it when you do that. =.= The "How was your weekend?" thing seems like a good idea though. I'm friends with one of his friends and we have this thing where we do this "Hey, how was...

I'm soo excited about it. The only problem is, the movie comes out in january over here where I live. >.<; I might go watch it for my birthday cos it's in that month. =D

Didn't get to say hi today. >.<; What would be like a good conversation though? I don't really want to sound too much like I'm TRYING to talk to him so...any suggestions at all?

I got a hi today but I still got a strange look. >.<; Sorry, this topic's kind of turning into something like a blog isn't it? XD I don't really know how I could start a convo though...I mean I know he skateboards but he doesn't know that I know that and I don't want to freak him out by...

I've been trying to say hi everyday but it isn't working like that. >.<; I managed to say hi to him after school and umm...I don't know how to describe it but umm..you know how sometimes the "cool" people don't wave but they kind of raise their chin at you in a way? XD Yeah, that's what he...

Haha okay. I'd love to read more soon but I don't blame you for being caught up in school stuff. XD I have the same problem here.